The editing is fine. You need a HD video camera and a doubler to give the viewer a show. If you video an animals at that range nothing is going to show up.
You can fancy up your channel with back ground and letter colors like I did.
YouTube - Microcystis's Channel
Run the Smokinfur video in high Def and you can actually see the individual hair strands float in the air. This is what HD and optical zoom do for you. Digital zoom is mostly worthless so don't get confused about it. Just as any other optical device a camera is all about the quality of the glass in the lens. What a surprise!.
I don't add music nor graphics/special effects as it doesn't interest me to do so. But I appreciate it in other peoples videos.
Other point is that some one posted information on how to make a good video and it seems it takes a few seconds for a person to actually take in the background and everything before you introduce any action. So I would suggest a little more time before the first shot is fired so the viewer can figure out what they are watching.